Wednesday, September 8, 2010

This what happens when I get bored.

This is a creative writing I did in high school. Hope you like it.

"I walk through the light for what seems like hours til I reach the gates that block this world from the next. The writing on the gates was in a language in which I did not recognized, but as I looked on, words start flowing though my head.

"Beyond this gate lies a world meant for eyes who see what can not be seen and ears who hear what is meant to be heard. Those who can not do these acts shall be forever shrouded in darkness and forced to walk shadows to never see the light again."

As these thoughts went through my head the doors open to a world of darkness. The darkness spreads covering up the light that once was around me. Arms made of shadows start pulling me in, suffocating me to the point that I could barely breathe. Wrapping around me is darkness so I can only see the dark. No light, no sound, not even a whisper. Just silence... The silence was deafening. I try to call out, but as soon as I did the shadows stole my voice, crushing it into a million pieces and vanishing into nothing. However that one cry echo through out the darkness. Soon it became as deafening as the silence. No one could hear it. No one to pull me from this death trap. Forever lost and forever alone.

As time went by and slowly I came costume to the silence, when the echo finally died. For awhile I thought I lost my hearing and my sight when all of a sudden a whisper came to my ears.

"Can you hear me?" 

Was this what was meant to be heard? As I thought to myself I smiled a small smile. Maybe there's hope yet. Unfortunately that was all I heard. Nothing else came. I strain my ears to hear more whispers, but none ever came. Slowly I started to die inside to the point where I was a lifeless doll. The shadows then slowly let me go and I started to fall. Falling and falling like falling into a endless pit. I fell until I stopped. Like someone caught me. Carefully I was put down. Then I hear.

" Can you hear me?" 

I open my eyes, but I still could only see darkness. I shook my head yes sense I couldn't speak.

" Sigh... Good. I like to ask for your forgiveness. This was not your punishment to serve. Your eyes saw the unseen and your ears heard the unheard. Please forgive me." 

As soon as the voice finished a rush of light flooded the room blinding me for a second. I opened my eyes and I was back in the white room of light in front of the gates. No one is around me and I am alone. I get up and look back up at the gates and realize they were different. The first set gates were like doors of darkness with the cold chill of death radiating off of them. The gates in front of me were like doors of light and a sense of warmth and life radiating from them. The doors soon opened and a bright light shown through. As I walked in I heard the voice one last time.

" Sorry."     

Tell me what you think please.

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